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Friday 11 September 2015

Emily Wonderful pie

A homemade cherry pie with a


By jane Cornish Emily Wonderful pie

Once Emily had a pie for her lunch Emily and her mum baked it for her lunch when she looked at it, it looked squishy and squashy and wonderful.When she went to school she was still thinking about her pie. Then it was lunch time Emily got her lunch box out then looked at her pie it was beautiful when she took it out her friend came over and sat next to Emily and said “ can i have some of your yummy pie”  said hazel and Emily said “yes “but have a little bite but she didn't. Suddenly another person came to Emily her name was Thida she said “can i have a big bite?”  then Emily said “ no have a little bite” then thida said “ ok “ then she had a bite.Liz came and looked at Emily pie she lick  her lips and said “can i have some of your pie” because i love your pie it is so wonderful but it is a little bit said Emily then she said ok then and she did. Suddenly a teacher came she said that a wonderful pie Emily said it is a wonderful pie said Emily then the teacher said “can i have a bite “ said the teacher then Emily said “ok “you can have a bite when the teacher had a bite Emily felt sad because it was just a little bit. When liz came Emily saw a big pie then she felt happy and they enjoyed it.











1 comment:

  1. hi losehina i like what you have done with your emilys wonderfull pie because it looks tasty.and it is cool. fromayla

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