Hey Losehina, what a cool concept with the interview style writing. Next time, if you want to go the extra mile, you could try putting quotation marks before and after each question and answer. For example:
"How do you feel....?" asked Losehina (the interviewer). "I am ready to win..." responded Yohan. The interviewer then followed on with another question, "What place do you think you are going to come?" etc.
Hopefully that makes sense to you. If you have any questions I am sure your teacher will help, or you can find me in the team 5 block every Monday to Thursday 2pm-3pm.
Hey Losehina, what a cool concept with the interview style writing.
ReplyDeleteNext time, if you want to go the extra mile, you could try putting quotation marks before and after each question and answer. For example:
"How do you feel....?" asked Losehina (the interviewer).
"I am ready to win..." responded Yohan.
The interviewer then followed on with another question, "What place do you think you are going to come?" etc.
Hopefully that makes sense to you. If you have any questions I am sure your teacher will help, or you can find me in the team 5 block every Monday to Thursday 2pm-3pm.
Keep up the great work!
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