Tuesday, 26 September 2017

Funny story starter

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My mum was wondering if I was soo bored? So she told me to catch a train for a ride to the city and come back so I said ‘’yes’’.
In the train  I saw my honest uncle who finds buried treasure so I said where are you heading and he said  ‘’I'm going to the city to find a buried treasure” so I said if I can come along and he said”sure but if your mum allows you to come so I was like yeah sure she said because i'm heading to the city too.

When we got there my honest uncle  said that the buried treasure is underneath the sand at the beach. When we got to to the beach we sat on the sand to take a break but when I sat I found something hard at it had a cross I told my uncle and he said that it a sigh for a treasure. We were so happy when we pulled it out with a special key.

We hop back on the bus and my honest uncle gave me something special it was treasure my uncle said” that it was for me because he already has soo much.

I said goodbye to my uncle because it was pleasure for the treasure. I got home and I yelled mum I had a great time because I saw honest uncle on the train heading to the city and I asked him can I go along with him and guess what we found mum treasure.We have so much money mum it like we are famous I had a great time today thanks mum.


This writing was fun and it also a good story if only you like it. Story starter This is a link to it if only you have time to write a story and it will be fun and funny.

Walt: Use Scholastic story starters to write a creative story

Walt: Link my ideas between each paragraph

Wednesday, 20 September 2017

Best trip ever

With an exciting mode we went on a bus to Stardom it was held at One Tree Hill it had a good fresh start. Well we were on the bus we were playing a game we had to pick what color  car and count it and whoever  get the most they are the winner.Screenshot 2017-09-15 at 10.39.17 AM.png

With a step out the door of the bus I rushed and sat up because we came early and the lady came out of the door and said” that we have time to go on the park”. First i went on the spinning wheel and i got so dizzy and told them to stop because it was nerve rackingScreenshot 2017-09-15 at 10.51.18 AM.png.
Also I did not like the spiderweb because I fell and my leg fell in the whole it was hilarious.Screenshot 2017-09-15 at 12.19.58 PM.png
I ran down to where I was sitting before and sat up it was time to explore Stardome.We clapped and put our hand up. After that we had to grab a tablet and answer the question we got some clues from the information we got 6 right and 1 wrong.
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We all new the question because we been learning about  planet and the solar system. When we finished we lined up for the second section but first we had to fill the back seat at the back i was sitting with Leilani,Angel,Paige,Marie and Madison our chairs were comfortable. We watched the  movie for 45 minute we were also not allowed to take photo in the big room. At the end we looked at each other and said” our hairs messy”.

We walked out and saw another class with a man explaining the same information that the lady said” but anyways it was time to hop on the bus. We went Through the motorway to school and i was lucky because me and Upi was at the front.
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The End.
Taski Description.

Im soo sorry that i did not say the name of the lady because i did not remember also we only had 3 hours and we left at 9 o'clock. The  story i wrote

Walt: Break up our ideas into different paragraphs.
Walt: Use a full stop at the end of every sentence.

Sunday, 10 September 2017

I missed out of cross country

Why i did not go cross country?

I did not go because I was sick and I could not say a word I also so  knew a way to tell them i made a doc and write something. I was wondering how would it be like running at cross country.

What did it feel like missing out of cross country?

I felt horrible because i didn't run and it was not fair for other kids to run. I was telling my sister to go because i knew she will come first out of the year 4’s.

What happen the next day?

I asked my friend did she go cross country and she “said yes but she didn’t ran” and i was standing there saying to myself next time when there is cross country i am going to school but not running.

The happy Exhausted winners?
The winners the came first second and third at cross country was 1st Tehillah , 2nd Jorelle and last but not least was my cousin Christina.I hope they become more faster this year.


here is some photos to share with you

Friday, 1 September 2017

For Daisy

Daisy Rm 8,7 and 6 miss you soo much that we made this for you and we will never forget about you.We hope you enjoy the fun.